Score: 5

"Heard a few of your songs...."

submission: Architects Of Plague

date: July 11, 2009

They're pretty good for heavy metal.. but considering you dont do vocals and its all heavy metal with the same sounds... they all sound the same. Dont mean to sound like a dick because they are all well produced and stuff but just far too generic.

Score: 8

"Cool song but..."

submission: Man I suck at song titles.

date: May 19, 2009

Sounds a bit "The Libertine's"ish which, if thats what your going for, you've done pretty well.
Improvements
- Add drums. I realise thats not a very useful piece of advice lol but i think me and you both know they would work well here regardless of what other reviewers have said.
- If you don't want to add drums, take any distortion or overdrive off of that guitar and turn the volume down. Even if you do add drums, still the guitar volume down.
- Like the vocals but add some reverb, to them and mess around with them a bit. Stand a bit further from the microphone.
- If you add drums, make sure you add a good catchy bassline.

I've done and do some pretty similar stuff to this kind of music and i do kind of know what im talking about, im not just an a-hole. Its a really good song though mate, its just you asked for ideas to improve and i listed a few.

Score: 7

"Yeah its pretty good"

submission: Homophobe (rough Demo)

date: May 16, 2009

Sounds like you wrote the vocals before writing the music though? Because sometimes they don't fit... but i'm reviewing this song like i've just heard it off a professional album which is possibly a bit unfair because i realise its just a demo you did when you were younger.

Its good but i get the impression you can do alot better now.